Some people believe that media (such as newspapers) should be allowed to publish information about the private life of people. Others say that people have a right to privacy and the issue must be controlled or even stopped. Give your own opinion.
Celebrities are always a center of attraction among their fans. Due to this media always try to peep into their personal lives, sometimes they crossed their limits and post about very personal moments of famous people. Personally, I do not find this ethical to write about anyone without his permission.
The prime reason to restrict media to do so is the privacy of life. Every individual demands some secrecy in life. Specially, celebrities need it more because, they have a image in society which will hamper due their casual behavior. Moreover, if everything posted publically, the followers of them will try to imitate as their role models do. Along with this, it is the matter of their dignity, which should be retained at any cost. For instance, a survey published by government of India, states that 60%of youngsters start smoking, to follow the footsteps of their icons. Hence, it causes the adverse effects on fan following of that particular celebrity.
Along with this, the flamboyant living culture of famous personalities cause serious impacts on society. People follow them and waste the money and time to be like them. Apart from this articles about affairs of well known personalities destroy their career as well as social image. Moreover, it is totally unethical to post pictures of someone's private time. For instance, during last decade, more than 10 film stars in bollywood committed suicide after their pictures of private intimate scenes got viral. So these illegal practices of newspaper or magazines can cost someone's life.
In short, penetration into personal life of famous people cannot be tolerated at any cost. So it is the need of hour to grant some restrictions on media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...brities need it more because, they have a image in society which will hamper due ...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ey and time to be like them. Apart from this articles about affairs of well known pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for instance, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08540925267 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59007754042 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3447272048 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3888888889 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145398206271 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461827634179 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040917865016 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969238658595 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381210098865 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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