Some people believe money is a less important factor than free time for quality of life. What other factors are necessary to live a good quality of lifestyle?
Every person has their own perspective on life, some consider wealth as a symbol of the lifestyle, while others believe the time is the ultimate asset for living a dream life. With that in mind, people trust that time is a far more important factor than money when it comes to a living quality life. Although money and time are important, having a healthy mindset, and good relationships are important features that can make life better.
First of all, with every one living a busy life, a healthy mind can be a great asset to a good lifestyle. A healthy mindset can provide a peaceful life, and keeps an individual behavior positive. When it comes to peaceful life, an individual comes across many stressful situations during the day; however, having a peaceful mind can help a person in keeping a positive mindset. This brings the second point in the light; even though, there are many mental exercises that can help a person to keep staying positive. One such exercise is to start taking deep breaths or drinking water.
On the other hand, good relationships with family and friends can be a positive step towards a good quality of life. Not only does a good family provide you a sensation of motivation, but also helps a person in a difficult situation. Family provides you motivation, and they provide a purpose to live for something. When it comes to taking important decisions, a person that you look for advice is your family members.
In conclusion, people live in a society where importance is given to money and time; however, other assets can also make life worthwhile. Though a healthy mind provides you a stress-free life, the family contributes equally when it comes to living a good quality of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...comes to living a good quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, while, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85806451613 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60248020661 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487096774194 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4130899821 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310461182688 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114121177134 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103937325129 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232142937669 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142553284222 0.056905535591 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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