Most of children want to spend their times with activities that make them enjoy, such as watching television and playing computer games. Due to children lack of constraint, so parents should limit their children’s time for computer game and television. Additionally, they should encourage their children to read books to obtain a lot of advantages.
First of all, television and computer games can provide addictive behaviour in children even in adult. There are a lot of news present that children who are provided permission to play computer games without limitation from parents. They spend their time to play game all day without break. It affect directly to children body (It affects children physically) because they fast their meal to play video games, and use their eyes too much to focus monitor. As a result, parents should limit their children time for playing games and watching TV, and promote their children to read books for improving children’s knowledge and it is one way to spend time wisely.
In addition, playing games also affect to children’s concentration on their homework or a book. Children who addicted to computer games they cannot focus in activities that they recently doing. Because even they do their homework they still think about game. This problem can solve by treat their behaviour from psychologist. However, it is solving problem at a result. It will be better or not, if parents limit their children to spend time with computer games and television, and advocate their children to read books to practice their concentration for learning. If children have ability to focus their homeworks, they will pay attention in everything without interruption.
Last but not least, violent issues that came from television and video games can affect to children imitation, because children cannot separate good and bad habit. they will imitate
bad and think that, the habit that they were imitate is a good one. For example, children who play games about crime, they can imitate bad scene in game and become criminal in future. Without care by parents it is very harmful to children to imitate bad behaviour that cannot control, In other hands, if parents are limit children’s time in playing video games and watching television replacing with reading books. In video games contents maybe contain a inappropriate due to children ages. Parents should advise the proper way to their children; reading books. Most of contents in books especially studies books contain appropriate contents for children. Therefore, parents should limit their children to play computer games and watch television.
All in all, due to children evaluation that depend on their ages, parents should limit their children hours for watching TV and playing video games to prevent addiction, distraction, and imitation. Although there are inappropriate contents in computer games and television, if there are advice from parents children will get in to appropriate ways.
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- In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 56
- Some people believe that parents should limit their children hours of watching tv and playing computer games, but encourage to read books. Do you agree or disagree 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the children') or simply say ''Most children''.
Suggestion: Most of the children; Most children
Most of children want to spend their times with activiti...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
... to play game all day without break. It affect directly to children body It affects ch...
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Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in activities that they recently doing. Because even they do their homework they still ...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ren cannot separate good and bad habit. they will imitate bad and think that, th...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te good and bad habit. they will imitate bad and think that, the habit that they ...
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Line 8, column 46, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'imitated'.
Suggestion: imitated
...nd think that, the habit that they were imitate is a good one. For example, children wh...
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Line 8, column 174, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...e bad scene in game and become criminal in future. Without care by parents it is very ha...
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Line 8, column 460, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... In video games contents maybe contain a inappropriate due to children ages. Par...
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Line 8, column 569, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the contents') or simply say ''Most contents''.
Suggestion: Most of the contents; Most contents
...r way to their children; reading books. Most of contents in books especially studies books conta...
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Line 10, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ildren will get in to appropriate ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2531.0 1615.20841683 157% => OK
No of words: 476.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31722689076 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73845162345 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.411764705882 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 748.8 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0016959712 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.24 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.04 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343089672824 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132711130753 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10163959451 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231734182446 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0930647492234 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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