Some people believe that a person’s intelligence is inherited from the parents, while others believe that their environment is the main factor. Discuss these views. Which factor do you think is mostly responsible for intelligence?
Intelligence has been the most enviable feature in humans. There are few who attribute brains to genes whereas, others including myself will ascribe wit to circumstances There are valid arguments on both sides, which I will discuss, while expressing my opinion
There are few who argue in favour of parental intelligence point out the tendency of intelligent couples having brainy children with the same intellect. They claim that it is a scientifically known fact that genes influence the colour of the skin hair eyes and even intelligence of the child. Therefore, it goes without saying that a witty parent will give birth to a scholar. Like for illustration, Ram Jethmalani is a renowned Indian lawyer and politician and his son is also currently a senior Advocate of the high court serving as a leader of the Bharatya Janta Party. Hence it is clearly seen that children possess a major part of their parent’s intellect.
Many along with myself are of the opinion that environmental factors surely foster an individual's intellectual growth. There are many parents who haven’t made it big in life and have got average intelligence. Indeed, even their children witnessed a lot of hardships, like a large family, abject poverty, lack of opportunities. Yet, they have struggled a lot to hone their skills. Like for example, Oprah Winfrey She is a producer and is best known for her talk show The Oprah Winfrey Show and is currently the most intelligent as well as the richest black American woman in the World. So for a girl, who was pretty ordinary in her school days to become the most popular anchor and motivator of television can be credited only to her business acumen.
To conclude with, I am of the opinion, that intelligent people are mostly influenced by their environments especially, due to the challenges faced by them in the days of their struggle which makes them supersede over their limits in order to prove their worth to the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99090909091 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83773115182 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.2063975152 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.692307692 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200026702383 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588950188606 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448955104178 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119345762377 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262119425403 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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