Some people believe that a person’s intelligence is inherited from the parents, while others believe that their environment is the main factor. Discuss these views. Which factor do you think is mostly responsible for intelligence?
Although it is sometimes thought that environmental issues should be handled globally, other people believe that it ought to be dealt nation wise. In my opinion, tackling environmental issues either globally or nationally is depends upon severity of a problem.
On the one hand, discussing environmental problems on a global scale helps to get more ideas and solutions to overcome problems, according to some. For example, United nation keep discussing with many countries on devastating environmental issues such as global warming, preventing Ozone layer etc, which helps them to get more accurate solutions to overcome such problems. such kind of discussions, furthermore, helps to spread message across the world to tackle and overcome destructing environmental problems as media over the world keep close eyes on these discussion. discussing such kind of issues on a global level helps to share science and technologies to handle environmental problems. For instance, many developed countries have excellent tools to get advance information regarding Tsunami which can be shared among the non developed countries to help them to handle such major problems.
On the other hand, it is often thought that environmental problems ought to deal nationally as it helps to get a quick and accurate solution. issues such as Air pollution, water pollution should discuss nation wise because each nation can analyse these issues better and troubleshoot them accurately. discussing and handling these issues nationally helps them to be self reliant and motivates them for new inventions.
Finally, in my view, both methods are important to handle environmental issues but tacking these issues nationally or on global scale is truly depends on destructive level of the issue. discussing highly destructive issues on a global level helps to get different ideas and accurate answer to overcome these issues, whereas handling less harmful environmental problems nationally helps to get fast solution and nations apply themselves for new inventions.
In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe it would be better to handle more dangerous issues on a global scale and small issues nationally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, if, regarding, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54437869822 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9595383063 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473372781065 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.2396646573 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.153846154 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0848664628214 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411485677232 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221213741169 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587924261458 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0042744678888 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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