Some people believe that radio is the best way to get news while others think TV is better for this purpose. Discuss both views. Give your opinion and relevant examples.
In digital era, individuals have their own preference to how follow the News. Some of them prefer watching TV and others would rather listen to radio and keep themselves updated with latest news. In my opinion, watching news on TV is more appealing and keep me engaged.
There are various reasons why some people catch up on the news by listening to radio. Firstly, radio is a traditional way for broadcasting the news and mostly elderly members of the society get used to it, also the device is handy and portable which gives the listener opportunity to enjoy the program in any part of the house. Another reason why people might choose radio is that it does not need all your attention, for example, while driving, gardening, jogging, washing dishes and other daily routine, people could find out information about all over the world.
On the other hand, supporters of watching news may believe that television offers visual imagery beside text of news which can interest them to keep watching. They argue that news would be more touchable if pictures related to the event was presenting especially when it is talking about catastrophic phenomenon or someone who is running away from the law. Further measures would be the ability to choose favorable sections and mute the other parts which is impossible without having an image. Personally, I prefer follow the news on TV with all the colors and sound which comes with it that break the monotonous text of the news.
In conclusion, it seems to me that watching news would be a better option for connecting to the latest news around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...en to radio and keep themselves updated with latest news. In my opinion, watching news on T...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...meone who is running away from the law. Further measures would be the ability to choose...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, talking about, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84306569343 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47137428838 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602189781022 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6421272421 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.636363636 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253746872845 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955712997201 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471256125106 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148538892715 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502035369884 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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