In the past, people wore their traditional clothes and followed their culture. These days, most people wear similar clothes and therefore look very similar to one another. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
As we are living in a global village, more and more people are choosing to wear same attire which can lead to elimination of local costume. In my opinion, this is a negative development which can destroy our cultural heritage result in decreasing number of tourists as a source of income and bring about other problems later on for societies.
One serious problem that can arise from blending with everyone else in terms of clothing is that a bright side of each culture, which is local costume, would be forgotten. In other words, countries usually pride themselves on their cultural heritage and through this they can attract tourists from all over the world. By eliminating local costume as a significant side of culture, countries would loose one of the main tourist attractions which would directly influence on the number of visitors and as a result tourist industry could not flourish.
Another issue is that when people do not stand out from each other, society will be led to a boring interface for city dwellers. Humans spirit is seeking for variety and living in monotonous environment could cause difficulties such as depression.
Finally, folk costume has carried a period of time that is consist of the material, design and special occasion to wear. That is to say, if we let similar costume totally replace our traditional ones, our history will become invisible through times. A society would have no meaning without its history and its belongings.
In conclusion, although wearing same attire have become more popular among people, it has brought about too many problems for this to be considered positive trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08856088561 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60711487481 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59778597786 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4308145792 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135806336354 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443026294724 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249128310537 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635086780127 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159908378349 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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