Some people believe that robots are important for humans to develop their future while others think that it is a dangerous invention dangerous invention that will impact society negatively. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
While robots are often believed to be to be believed to be to be necessary for developing the future of human beings comma other consider that they will affect the community detrimentally.
On the one hand, some people believe that robots will supplant professionals in the upcoming years which will upsurge the unemployment rate. In other words, since these machines are more efficient compare two human beings, the increasing number of Companies will prefer to deploy them which would result in thousands of redundancies. For instance, according to the report published by The Tribune, famous Indian newspaper, revealed that after 30 years, these machines will replace 70% of workers at the automobile companies.
On the other hand, I agree with those advocating that robots are significant for humans` development because they are contributing enormously to accomplish certain indomitable tasks. To illustrate, due to the population explosion the need for food is increasing considerably, and the robotic technologies are helping farmers to expedite the production of fruits vegetables and other eatables. For instance, nowadays, it is possible to spray poisonous pesticides and weedicides effectively and swiftly with the help of robots, which was considered a difficult task a few years ago, and agriculturists used to do it very reluctantly which led to crop loss. Moreover, robots are also playing an important role in the health sector because there are many surgeries which require upteen precision, and surgeons cannot perform this successfully without the help of robotics of robotics.
To conclude, while people may vary in their opinions, I believe that human beings success in the future heavily depends on the robotic Technologies, as these machines are assisting humans in achieving insurmountable goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
While robots are often believed to be to be believed to be to be necessary for deve...
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Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'to be'.
Suggestion: to be
...are often believed to be to be believed to be to be necessary for developing the future of ...
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Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...sary for developing the future of human beings comma other consider that they will aff...
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Line 5, column 862, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'of robotics'.
Suggestion: of robotics
...form this successfully without the help of robotics of robotics. To conclude, while people may vary ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...in their opinions, I believe that human beings success in the future heavily depends o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53736654804 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03256724199 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615658362989 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.5633793118 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.888888889 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2222222222 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228867540901 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926657467775 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537886141318 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141745558526 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249308754464 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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