Some people become famous at the young age. Is it a good thing or bad thing for them?
It is stated that some individuals get popularised in their childhood. In my opinion, due to being beneficial for their personal life and career growth, I consider it to be a positive development; however, counselling them Periodically is indispensable.
Firstly, children become economically independent after getting popularity. In other words, with their exceptional skills, they serve society and start earning money; as a result, they lead a luxurious and prosperous life. For instance, all the winners of The Little Champs, a famous dancing and singing reality show in India, are having opulent Lifestyle, but before winning the competition, most of them used to live in deplorable conditions.
Another point to consider is that after becoming the cynosures of society, youngsters get an encouragement to work hard. To illustrate, when they observe that their followers are admiring and respecting them for their achievements, they feel contented, and for maintaining their stardom, they make more efforts. For instance, Juhanvi, The youngest climber in the world, made the world record in 2014, at the age of twelve, by climbing the Mount Everest, and now, she is preparing for climbing one of the highest peaks of Europe.
However, the Juvenile celebrities must be provided with the regular counselling sessions so that they can be made aware regarding the various problems associated with being a famous, and it will also help them in managing their finances appropriately.
To conclude, children become industrious and financially independent by getting famous, but it is imperative for their parents and mentors to guide them regularly for saving them from going astray.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, so, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46564885496 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00959946602 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62213740458 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.8978777207 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.2 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176440075596 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068457094624 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467087422907 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102246000382 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487844162421 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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