Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
In the modern era, education have a very crucial role to play as it acts as a foundation for country's future. Some people think that children should not be burdened by providing extra work for home while others have an opinion that additional work will benefit the children with their education. I am personally in the favor of latter viewpoint.
Homework can have many benefits. Firstly,it teaches a child to be more responsible towards his or her studies. Children are forced to work independently away from the environment of schools. This will encourage them to think individually and creative...
- Government investment in art such as music and theater is a waste of money. The government should invest this money in public services. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Few people devote their time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effects this has on individual and society in general. 84
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion 70
- Some people think the air travel should be restricted because it causes environmental pollution. Do you agree or disagree? give your opinion and relevant examples. 67
- Should long term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...Homework can have many benefits. Firstly,it teaches a child to be more responsible ...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...time to relax and rejuvinate themselves so as to start the next day refreshed. This will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15471698113 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83763548598 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1893900961 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3529411765 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23529411765 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287503073454 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800353726672 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624635697977 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177338581456 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376393610798 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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