You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
-tell him which team won
-describe the conditions on the day
-say how you felt about the match
Dear Jenna,
I hope you are doing better now. I am writing this letter to share the details of the cricket match that we had last weekend. I am really excited to tell you about the great news that our girls team won the match against the boys team.
Although we did faced some problems with the weather as it was raining that morning. But later, the sky got cleared and we were able to start the match in the afternoon. As the weather was pleasant, we were able to grab a large number of audience, who, to my surprise, was cheering mostly for our team. With the motivation and encouragement from them, we were able to win the match somehow.
I personally feel that we could have played a lot better if you would have been there with us. Especially for me, as we have a good partnership on the field.
Hope to see you soon back on the ground with full enthusiasm.
Yours friend,
Manmeet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...cricket match that we had last weekend. I am really excited to tell you about the...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'face'
Suggestion: face
...ainst the boys team. Although we did faced some problems with the weather as it wa...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ther was pleasant, we were able to grab a large number of audience, who, to my surprise, was chee...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had been'?
Suggestion: had been
...e could have played a lot better if you would have been there with us. Especially for me, as we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40718562874 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26047705913 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7634984481 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9090909091 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276192794134 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997760463187 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560812752892 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147781472204 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722114528044 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.