Some people believe that spending on celebrating birthdays or weddings is a waste of money, but some argue that these celebrations can benefit both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is a growing trend of grand ceremonies of different occasions such as birthdays, weddings and house warming. It is often argued that these celebrations lead to unnecessary spending of money, whilst others disagree and argue that it is a positive trend for the overall welfare of an individual and society. This essay agrees with the former viewpoint that these events drain away a significant part of the money and will discuss both viewpoints to support the arguments with suitable examples.
It is irrefutable to say that in this modern era people spend their life savings to commemorate the occasions, particularly weddings and birthdays. Firstly, If looked at closely then this is certainly a negative trend and merely a wealth show-off depicted in the form of extensive celebrations. Secondly, instead of this unmindful spending, it is better to invest money wisely. For instance, instead of celebrating a child's first birthday at a five-star hotel, It is better to save that amount for his higher education. Similarly, court marriages can be preferred over elite weddings. Therefore, It is agreed that these large-scale parties can be avoided and money can be saved for essential future needs.
However, certain demographics of society disagree and feel that these occasional events definitely need grand celebrations.
In their opinion, these events bind the whole community together and are the platform of social communication. In addition to this, these special occasions have also become a social obligation for many people and offer individual happiness. Despite this, human interaction is still possible by other free of cost mediums such as parks and one can feel equally happy in the company of closed ones when birthdays are celebrated at house-level. Moreover, such sort of truck loaded spending on such functions set a wrong precedent on economically weak class. Therefore, this essay is in discord of this viewpoint that these lavish celebrations are for the good of an individual and society.
To recapitulate, I would like to reiterate that these hi-fi celebrations are a complete waste of money and should be invested appropriately. Though, certain people still feel that the absence of such events will deprive of the social interaction. But it is a wrong perception and can be mitigated by public awareness of facts represented above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 142, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31564986737 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94737335409 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562334217507 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4827814267 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9444444444 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239554885569 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671655109666 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051235493291 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122797797021 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602838185959 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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