Some people believe that sports are a key element in our society, while others argue that it’s just a recreational activity to be done in one’s free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a controversial issue about the importance of sports. Some social workers argue that it is imperative aspect of public life, while some gym attendees consider it as an active recreation. This essay will discuss both points of view and agrees with the idea of sports as a leisure time activity.
Let us start with the reasons why some social workers claim that sports is an essential element of community. The first reason is that it allows people communicate with others. People, who feel lonely, can easily make friends with other people at the gym, so it grants them the opportunity to avoid separation from society. Another reason is that it helps people keep fit. Humans, who suffer from excessive weight, may simply lose it by doing the workout either at the recreational centers or outdoors. Furthermore, it also promotes healthy lifestyle. Smokers, for example, tend to stop their unhealthy habit as soon as they go jogging regularly, since these two habits are inconsistent.
However, some gym visitors state that sports is basically a pastime activity. Firstly, people play sports to relax from hustle. Employed people, for instance, normally do physical exercises, such as jogging or brisk walking, to relieve the stress, which they have accumulated during the working day, but consider it as a way to spend leisure time. Secondly, people often abandon exercising. Citizens also are likely to quit doing the exercise, if they either get bored with it or have more important things to do. Moreover, it normally provides no money for the majority. Except professional athletes, ordinary people basically do sports for wellbeing, because it provides no income.
In conclusion, even though some social workers believe that sports is a significant aspect of life, I think that people should consider it as a healthy activity that they do at spare time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13071895425 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64416851807 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4786398607 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2222222222 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94444444444 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176406178921 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509345105577 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465839665638 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119825625669 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436349420345 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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