Some people believe that sports are key elements in our society, while others argue that it’s just a recreational activity to be done in one’s free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People in our society believe that sports are playing a vital role in every one’s life. But others are arguing that it just a leisure time activity. Being a part of society, I feel that sports is not just a free time activity but it must be a part of daily routine for each and every one who wants a healthy and physically fit life. Here, I explain both views which are the reasons why I support sports as key elements in our society.
However, Sports are effective in keeping us upbeat and keeps us physically fit as well as mentally fit too. Sports keep all the religion a side and keep all together, so yes it also plays an important role in our society to gather different religious people in one place. In past, though there was not more awareness about sports because of very less interest given by government as well as by our society too. But now a days people are very active and government also arrange different types of tournaments for the students and for elders and at somehow they are trying to encourage them. Sports keep us active, punctual, healthy, alive and teaches us how to digest failure and victory in daily life.
On the other hand, people who are argued that it just a free time activity that shows less awareness towards sports. But it’s a different scenario for the people who are physically disabled. Looking at the current scenario everyone is busy in their routine so sport might be a leisure activity for them or say free time activity results they are not physically and mentally fit and easily caught by diseases. So as per my opinion sports must be a part of life, well say it must be your routine that make you to grow, to enhance your inner strength.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
... it must be a part of daily routine for each and every one who wants a healthy and physically fit ...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...ifferent religious people in one place. In past, though there was not more awareness ab...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ment as well as by our society too. But now a days people are very active and government a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, i feel, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53896103896 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35003938416 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506493506494 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7538840203 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333724363483 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125104569264 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770832189327 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25146278417 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137536108538 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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