Sports are playing a crucial role in our society nowadays. Many people play sports like a hobby to be healthier, meanwhile others play profesional sports as their career in the world. As my perspective, There are numerous porposes for playing sports. It is depended on their choice and talent. However, If i had to make a decision , i would lean to both two of views.
Get to the detail, firstly, we will consider the first view which sports are a job in our life. For people who were actually talented about sports, they were living evidences to this point of view. There are various contests about sports in the world, namely soccer, baseball, swimming, badminton,etc. These game always have their rewards which are money, honour, popularation but money is the primary actually. Therefore, individuals who have their own aptitude for these areas would take participate in them and make money. However, it will rather rude if I call their profession in sports as a talent. Beside, there were amount of people who were not have any talent, they were hard-working people and practiced a lot for their contest. That is the reason for using their awards for their finacial income. Sporters combined their passion and profit for continuing to improve their own strength. Everyone have dreamt about becoming a professional sport player sometimes. We has seen numerous sport players became a millionair, or even billionair with their passion to these pastime games.
Meanwhile, some indivisuals just play sports as a excersice. Sporters who are busy for their career, personal work,etc, they reach these gymnastic games to be healthier in both mental and physical health. As a pastime games, these people play sports after a exhausted day to find themselve usually. Nothing strange if a person rejects or even out of work for enthusiasms for professional sports.
In conclusion, we can not judge anyone for their choices and talents. Everybody have rights to play sports for finacial income or just to our fitness and health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05988023952 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63322838648 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565868263473 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4886540956 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.8181818182 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119057202189 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432225897151 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452085502031 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896528344183 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271364880862 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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