Some people believe that subjects such as art, music, drama and creative writing have a bright future. Therefore, schools should spend more time teaching these subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
These days, many schools give training on artistic subjects such as dance, drama and creative writing. It is believed by some people that these subjects should be given more importance in schools because these subjects have prosperous future. I do not agree with the statement and believe that as all students do not have appetite for these extra-curricular subjects, so spending more time in schools on them would not serve the purpose.
To begin with, it is well known fact that every student does not manifest the skills like singing, painting and dancing. Therefore, providing extra time to build these skills in schools may not benefit all the students. Being taught to acquire such skills may develop taste for the same, however, to excel in it requires some inborn. The ones, who are gifted with such skills can hone their them by taking extra classes after school time. For instance, these days, there are various private training classes on singing or dancing, the students possess those skills can enroll there to have a better future in this field.
Yet another argument to support my view point is that there is more need of engineers, doctors, scientists or teachers than dancers, singers or painters. If more time is given on artistic subjects, then academic subjects may suffer and students may manifest lacking skills in their study. Hence, more emphasis should be given on science and math, so that there will be more adults standing a chance to serve the nation as an engineer, medical officer or politicians.
To conclude, it is clear from aforementioned arguments that although singing, painting and dancing have bright future, however, all students do not possess such skills. Therefore, the students with innate signing or dancing skills should nurture their talent by taking extra classes after school time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for instance', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254437869822 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.171597633136 0.155533422707 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0887573964497 0.0946595960268 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0384615384615 0.0501214627716 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0325443786982 0.0437548338989 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118343195266 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0473372781065 0.0403226058552 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42659135481 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0236686390533 0.0326793684256 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0769230769231 0.0861772015684 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0325443786982 0.021408717616 152% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00591715976331 0.011925033212 50% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1840.0 1933.35771543 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11295681063 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.401993355482 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.299003322259 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189368770764 0.203846283523 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.063122923588 0.137316102897 46% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.42659135481 2.80594681477 86% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544850498339 0.56093040696 97% => OK
Word variations: 56.4430840343 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1538461538 20.7743622355 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1624869309 49.517814964 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.538461538 127.492653851 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7743622355 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.814263465372 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 53.0541783798 49.1944974215 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.73170731707 1.69124875643 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386595803238 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120673853253 0.102741220458 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0474755798138 0.0668466124924 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562235366918 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0787641712937 0.148594505496 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153852982675 0.134430193775 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746647151109 0.0742795772207 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.208751194306 0.324371583561 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0449149086117 0.0638462369009 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256270972445 0.228012699653 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116741210631 0.058150111329 201% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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