Some people believe teaching children at home is best for child development while others thing that it is important for your child to go to school discuss advantages of both and give your opinion.
education shape up a child's career.Few are of the opinion that teaching children at home is best while some think sending them to school is important. Both have it's own advantages in my view.
By taking up studies at home parents are rest assured that their kids are safe and not mixing up with other students who might be spoilt or in bad company. Their children are in constant supervision or guidance. The parents also have the convenience of teaching their children at their own pace and time. There is no pressure of completing homework on time or of exams.
On the other hand the plus point of sending children to school is that they get the exposure of studying in team. this will pave a path for them to come out of the usual mundane routine which they otherwise would follow at home. it helps the kids to develop a sense of competition, tolerance, keep themselves upgraded with the latest techniques at school and can adopt a new style of learning. In this fast growing world where everyone seems to be competing with each other be it at school or at work it is imperative that children go to school and gain knowledge so that they are kind of preparing themselves for future.
In nutshell I feel the best way to educate children is at school. children are the future of any country and it is of utmost importance to give lead them towards the right way of gaining knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, i feel, kind of, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55378486056 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4807955894 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569721115538 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3431519452 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30428046491 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979416970639 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716413645302 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176933846762 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780503577686 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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