Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that circumstances of an individual crime, a motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment
Discuss both the view and give your own opinion.
crime is break down of law and order in a nation. they are act punishable under the law of the land. although, fixing punishment type per crime may be considered appropriate by many. I strongly believe that the type of sentencing given to an offencer should be consumerate to the offence, so as to reduce crime and ensure fairness in the legal system.
crime is break down of law and order in a nation. they are act punishable under the law of the land. although, fixing punishment type per crime may be considered appropriate by many. I strongly believe that the type of sentencing given to an offencer should be consumerate to the offence, so as to reduce crime and ensure fairness in the legal system. crime is break down of law and order in a nation. they are act punishable under the law of the land. although, fixing punishment type per crime may be considered appropriate by many. I strongly believe that the type of sentencing given to an offencer should be consumerate to the offence, so as to reduce crime and ensure fairness in the legal system.
crime is break down of law and order in a nation. they are act punishable under the law of the land. although, fixing punishment type per crime may be considered appropriate by many. I strongly believe that the type of sentencing given to an offencer should be consumerate to the offence, so as to reduce crime and ensure fairness in the legal system.
crime is break down of law and order in a nation. they are act punishable under the law of the land. although, fixing punishment type per crime may be considered appropriate by many. I strongly believe that the type of sentencing given to an offencer should be consumerate to the offence, so as to reduce crime and ensure fairness in the legal system. crime is break down of law and order in a nation. they are act punishable under the law of the land. although, fixing punishment type per crime may be considered appropriate by many. I strongly believe that the type of sentencing given to an offencer should be consumerate to the offence, so as to reduce crime and ensure fairness in the legal system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61375661376 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68230486434 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 48.0 176.041082164 27% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.126984126984 0.561755894193 23% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5025772511 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 7.06120827912 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 24.0 3.9879759519 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266206442542 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131028838649 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792272584428 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266206442542 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 1.5 8.58950901804 17% => Dale chall readability score is low.
difficult_words: 18.0 78.4519038076 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.