Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that circumstances of an individual crime, a motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment
Discuss both the view and give your own opinion.
At the present time, there is an endless controversy about appropriate rules and punishments for criminals. While some people state that they should punish offenders differently for each type of crimes, others argue that the situations of committing crimes need to be considered. Hence, this essay will discuss both views before providing an individual opinion.
On the one hand, due to the increase of crimes rate, many people claim that offences should be classifies into categories and have different levels of punishments. In this case, courts will work faster because judges do not need much time to decide the suitable punishments to the culprits as it have been already decided for them. However, this is obviously an unjustified practice since the robbery of a convenient store may receive the same castigation as the ones who rob a bank.
On the other hand, it is cited the punishment system should be more flexible as in many circumstances, the culprit is not the real wrongdoer, For instance, maybe a killer is just a victim and she ( or he ) is just self-defence to get risk of an assault from others. Moreover, the courts will work more efficient and justified as people are convicted fairly in all aspects.
To conclude, although making a fixed punishment system may useful in some extent, I still believe that the most appropriate verdict is only made when the judge consider carefully in all side of a crimes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 196, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... maybe a killer is just a victim and she or he is just self-defence to get risk ...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a killer is just a victim and she or he is just self-defence to get risk of an a...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a crime' or simply 'crimes'?
Suggestion: a crime; crimes
...judge consider carefully in all side of a crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99581589958 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75503235058 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644351464435 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2779844133 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5555555556 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348800605991 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121036280329 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0982963623667 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184190903293 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877924820297 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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