Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment
Some people. argue that specific punishments should be available for each type of crime while it is believed that when making decision on punishment, the circumstances and what motivates crime should be should be considered.
Obviously, fixed punishments are discussed and supported systematically by people who have rights before it is put into practice. These laws may stringent enough to warn or punish criminals with especially serious crimes.
On the other hand, some people believe that situation when crimes happend and motivation are also important whrn the court consider punishment. In addition, there are variously different roots leading to a crime and depending on level of seriousness that criminals should be punished deservingly with consequences they caused.
In my point of view, it is not equal to make a judgement whithout considering involvingly different prospects. For some crimes, maybe criminals is victims whom circumstance forces to do terrible things to protect themselves from intentionally serious crime. Therefore, it is not equal if people compare serial kilers or a rape crimes with crime caused by being threatened. Basing on fixed laws is foundation while circumstance and motivation are determinant when making up a punishment. To ensure the equality and justice, people who have rights to decide on punishment should consider flexibly between laws and many others elements.
In my conclusion, I agree that fixed punishment may be efficient in some certain cases but to be more approriate, circumstance and motivation should be taken into account as important factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52226720648 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04199221971 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599190283401 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2236664001 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.537650732153 0.244688304435 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171523856648 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13989005464 0.0667982634062 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311802507046 0.151304729494 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141206594426 0.056905535591 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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