Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The debate on whether citizens should pay taxes has been going on for so many years. On the one side, there are people who believe taxes should not be paid, however, I disagree to this opinion because paying taxes would allow the state to act seamlessly and aid in facilitating better lifestyle to its countrymen.

One the one hand, citizens can save more money for themselves by not paying taxes. This would allow an individual to spend the extra money on important aspects of their personal life. People would be happier to stay in states with no tax policies as they get more value for their efforts. For Example, Saudi Arabia does not collect taxes from their workers and this encourages a higher number of immigrants in their country, thereby leading to a better economy of the nation.

On the other hand, I believe taxes should be collected from all working citizens as it promotes development in the state. When the government is supported by tax money, it can use this money on better infrastructure and recreational facilities. As an example, USA deducts 30% of tax money from its workers and spends this money on providing good public transport and free education to the children. When the government is able to make sure better services to the families of tax payers, it encourages skilled professionals to continue working for the nation and promotes GDP growth.

Although taxes can cause a drop in the savings of each tax payer, I strongly believe every nation should collect taxes from its working citizens as it assists the government to serve its people better by delivering valuable services.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90875912409 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58857938778 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532846715328 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.503600821 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.272727273 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249987338477 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104491233048 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687902062489 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163666425416 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499876144521 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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