Some people believe today that everyone has a right to access to the Internet and that governments should provide this access for free. Other people believe that access to the internet is not a right and should be paid for like other services.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
it is being common among all ages to access internet for various purposes, but some people believe that due to excess usage it should be free. On another side numerous people oppose this stament. In the following paragraphs we will discuss both sides with its fact and also present my own view.
Usage of internet has exceed because of digitalization so, authorities should plan to provide this facility at very low cost or free of cost. Which can be privilaged by those who can not afford like students who live under poverty line. For example with the help of internet nowadays students can complete their assignments and projects with in the deadlines, because the availability of enough resources like google, wikipedia and other search engines. if this facility will charge very low or no cost then it will not create burden on their pocket. Hence with the help of free facility they can complete their courses without any distruption.
need of internet for illegal or other wrong tasks can create ostacles in the success of a nation. To illustrate, terrorist who do not think in the favour of country or humanity always use this facility to find out the formulas of making disaster bombs. if these kinds of person will use this facility at no cost then it will be a motivated steps towards their malicious purpose. When they will purchase internet connection then they need to submit their identity cards to the concern so that they can easily verify at the time of emergencies. Therefore charging for this comfort is good especially for mankind.
Conclusively, internet has become a part of everyone's life. some companies provide it at free of cost others charge some liitle expenses. I will support the second attitude that there shoul be some charges so, that misusage can be avoided
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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it is being common among all ages to acces...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ility at very low cost or free of cost. Which can be privilaged by those who can not ...
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... privilaged by those who can not afford like students who live under poverty line. F...
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...will not create burden on their pocket. Hence with the help of free facility they can...
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... the formulas of making disaster bombs. if these kinds of person will use this fac...
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...charges so, that misusage can be avoided
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, then, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93770491803 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50818600662 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577049180328 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0087416498 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278877723346 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915269258308 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870307459449 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181060900542 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079556289505 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.