Nowadays, some parents pressure their children to be successful in particular fields. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Opting some set of subjects by the children have become common under the influence of their elders so, that they can achieve a designated job and become financially sound. But these kinds of thoughts may indulge the future of youngsters towards dark due to extra burden on their mind. I think this is an adverse approach of mind.
Watching people who earn name and fame in front of society due to some specialization like medical, computers etc. are influenced the parents that if their own infants study these subjects then they can achieve higher designation which can provide them smart amount of packages and also escape them from financial barriers in their future. For an example after qualifying in PMT test students complete their MBBS degree and become doctors who earn huge from a single surgery. Therefore, guardians force them to become master in particular stream.
Consequentially, these actions which are being taken by parents push their juveniles towards mental depression, because sometime adolescence are not that much capable that they can understand science or technology lessons. So, the result may create burden on their brain and anxiety in family atmosphere which feel them sick and abnormal. To illustrate, in a survey it has been showed that more than 75% students of chemistry are consuming sleeping pills due to difficult syllabus and beyond their grabbing power. Therefore, instead of polishing the future of our new generation we are putting them into bin.
Conclusively, no doubt everyone wants to see their next generation like a rising star in the sky, but by pushing them forcefully may create obstacles in the way of their success. Hence, they need to adopt that way from whole heartedly not strictly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, i think, in particular, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16140350877 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62164205778 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635087719298 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4597780581 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.153846154 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138846522646 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464163193433 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297580961874 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825463814411 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194737331632 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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