Some people believe that traveling alone is the best way to experience a country or a culture. Others feel that it is better to travel with people you know. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there are many people who tend to travel and explore the world. Although some experts believe that traveling alone will improve people's mentality and broaden knowledge about a country or a culture, I completely agree with those who think that you should travel with someone you know.
On the one hand, having a solitary journey will become a fascinating experience with everyone daring to do it. In my view, there are two reasons why individuals want to go abroad to a foreign country. First, these solo travelers do not depend on anyone and take all decisions on their own, which means that they take all responsibility to do everything in their journey. Although it is too frightening at the first time, most of them will become cleverer and more competent individuals since they learned a particular skill during those trips. Take a journey for instance. We will be able to waste time buying meals if we come with our company. Second, being a supporter of travelling on one’s own argues that it is a great opportunity to build self-confidence. Thus, you can adapt to most situations not only as a tourist but also in your life.
On the other hand, no one can deny the importance of going to a nation with our company. The main reason is that group travel can create bonds between the members engaged in the experience. Most members will help each other if they do anything together during that trip, such as carrying the backpack, building a tent, cooking a meal, etc. Moreover, going with the individuals from your country reduces the stress of having to struggle in a foreign language all day long. As a result, I firmly agree that we know how to deal with a foreign tongue issue during the journey.
To sum up, although some people believe that travelling alone is the best way to experience a country or a culture, ultimately, some others agree that it is better to go with someone who you know to ensure safety. Therefore, on balance, I believe that we should travel with a group to enjoy some sightseeing views together.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, you know, as a result, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73389355742 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60858468187 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549019607843 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6754170473 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4117647059 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343913521648 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995256359647 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116021855265 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251848681861 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150925209328 0.056905535591 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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