Some people think that older employees contribute most to the success of a company. Others think that younger people play a more vital role. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this day and age, the reputation of the most well-known company depends on the difference of strategies. While some people believe that younger workers can bring new values, I agree with those who feel that older employees contribute to the company's success.
On the one hand, younger staff will bring up both enthusiasm and energy, which will contribute to the achievement of business. First, the juvenile people are always updated to the new trend of activity. That means, these companies can expand economic opportunities due to keeping up with several fields, such as Technology, Advertisement, etc. For example, some of them can easily keep up with the demand of consumers for new advertisement channels. Moreover, most of these people have low salaries because of lacking experience. As a result, the director will be able to not only spend the budget but also press younger employees to have a dedication for this company.
On the other hand, no one can deny the contribution of the older people to the triumph of most companies. They have a deep experience about every factor of the company based on the time they have served, such as weakness and strongest, product, etc. Hence, they can help their supervisors in making any decision in some critical situation. Moreover, Not only do they have a multitasking job for the business, but they also engage in training the new junior in order to keep up with the new industry. As a result, the company can reach most goals in both market and revenue.
In conclusion, although experts believe that youngsters can update to the new trend of technology, some others think that older ones bring about the stability of the company. Therefore, on balance, I believe that any company needs the older ones in order to be contributed for a long time instead of juvenile workers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95469255663 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71224442737 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508090614887 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3425518354 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.066666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220530763163 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800483703278 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649909783069 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150457104694 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452610097989 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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