Some people believe that uniforms at work places aren’t necessary. Do you agree or disagree with it? Give your own opinion and include examples from your experience.
In this cutting edge technology, it has been a debatable issue for many years that wearing the same attire in the office is mandatory or not? Different individuals have different opinions regarding the dress code. I completely disagree with the above notion. I believe that the same outfit is pivotal for every organization in order to represent equality, sense of discipline and coordination among employees. This essay will elaborate on the reasons and logic behind this in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are multifarious reasons which support that dress is mandatory for a company. Firstly, it represents the sense of equality and it helps in maintaining the equality system among the workforce thereby it will better for any organization. To illustrate, Maruti Company, a leading brand in the automobile sector, has a policy on the dress code, and each and every employee whether a high or low profile is required to follow it. Secondly, by wearing the same clothes, every staff feels a sense of discipline and coordination towards the factory. They believe that they are stack holders of the company thereby it can increase the productivity of the company and introduce a serene and tranquil atmosphere in an organization. Besides this, the staff does not have to spend money on clothing because they usually provide by the factory; therefore, it can reduce the expenditure of the workforce and they can fulfill their family commitments easily.
Apart from that, Is there any other benefit to wear the same dress in an organization. Certainly, yes there are many other merits. In the sales and marketing department, people should meet different people for different purposes. So, there is a huge requirement of a good dress code, For instance, a textile brand S. Kumar’s Limited has designed a special attire code for its sales and marketing team to get the best sales and maintain company reputation.
Thus, it is fair to conclude that the same outfit plays a significant role in an organization to maintain harmony, coordination, and a sense of discipline.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12023460411 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89493766444 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527859237537 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9883115782 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.705882353 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0453218410817 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180669696513 0.084324248473 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273633167825 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.026554656545 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198721147695 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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