Some people believe that university education is to help graduates to get better jobs. Others believe that there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Acquiring tertiary education is becoming tremendously popular nowadays. Some people are of opinion that the only purpose of tertiary education is to secure a better job, however others think that society and individuals benefit in broader ways. In my opinion, I believe that although the main aim of university education is to gain good jobs, there are additional benefits which must be considered.
It is certainly true that main objective of tertiary education is to have better career prospects. In other words, majority of pupils attend university to secure a sound career. A university degree enhances a person’s job profile and in turn results in attractiveness from potential employers. For instance, in Europe, getting a professional degree is quite expensive, so many students would not consider it, if they would not find it worthy for securing a future and high standard of living. Furthermore, many universities maintain a reputation. In other words, they ensure their graduates would get best jobs in the markets. As result of that, they secure their future funding and student’s application as well.
On the contrary, there are other advantages that could be achieved from University education. Firstly, students develop social skills and improve themselves as a person. They spend their valuable time socializing with other students from different culture. Consequently, they develop maturity and confidence which enable them to cope with struggles of life ahead. Secondly, society will be contributed from graduates in term of economic prosperity. We are living in competitive world, so countries, especially developing countries, need graduated people to compete and work for economic growth.
In conclusion, I believe that even though job prospects could be secured with university education, there are further benefits for individuals and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59440559441 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01320710978 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7189085387 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1176470588 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276038233001 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081577993664 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709438679586 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181555819357 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878624042939 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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