some people believe using bicycle as a main form of transportation has a lot of advantages whereas other thinks it has disadvantages.
discuss both the views. Give your own opinion.
Bicycles are the oldest means of transportation but still used effectively these days. Some people thinks that choosing bicycle as a main transportation medium has many advantages while other people argues that it has several drawbacks. In this essay I will discuss the advantages such as good health and better environment and some disadvantages like slow speed. Further I will provide my opinion on this argument.
There are several benefits of opting bikes as a major form of transportation such as It would improve the environmental conditions to a great extent by decreasing the level of pollution. As bicycles do not burn any fuel while operation thus they have zero percent contribution to pollution. Another significant benefit of aforesaid change would be that It would improve our health. Due to hi-tech automobiles people have become more and more lethargic which further impact their health negatively. Nowadays, five out of ten people are the patient of high cholesterol and high blood pressure and obesity as well. Recently while giving an interview to WHO executive, the team of doctors from different countries have said that If we do cycling thirty minutes a day, then we do not need medicines for these small issues.
However some people believes that there are some downsides of choosing bicycles over other mode of transportation. The primary disadvantage is that bicycles are time inefficient. For example , if I ride bicycle to my office which is 10 miles away from my house, it would take 25 minutes which is more than twice if I drive by car. Nowadays, every person is living a busy schedule, thus riding bicycle would definitely hamper his time which he could use for any other work.
In my opinion, The advantages of opting bicycles against other modes of transport outweigh its disadvantages. I would agree with the famous quote 'Health is Wealth' and we could definitely improve our health by riding bicycle. If we could do cycling at gymnasium to reduce our fat or to keep our self fit then why not we opt it as a regular form of transport. Similarly This trend would reduce the level of pollution in our environment, which is one of the major problems of big cities around the world.
In conclusion, Bicycle riding could make us fit and help us fight with small health problems. However, it has some disadvantages as well such as slow speed which could be overcome by auto gear bicycles. I believe that choosing bicycle as a main form of transportation has more benefits over drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bicycle'
Suggestion: to bicycle
... days. Some people thinks that choosing bicycle as a main transportation medium has man...
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Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t by decreasing the level of pollution. As bicycles do not burn any fuel while ope...
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Line 2, column 650, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a executive'.
Suggestion: Who is a executive
.... Recently while giving an interview to WHO executive, the team of doctors from different cou...
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Line 2, column 818, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... need medicines for these small issues. However some people believes that there ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ed medicines for these small issues. However some people believes that there are som...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cycles are time inefficient. For example , if I ride bicycle to my office which is...
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Line 4, column 359, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... opt it as a regular form of transport. Similarly This trend would reduce the level of po...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bicycle'
Suggestion: to bicycle
... gear bicycles. I believe that choosing bicycle as a main form of transportation has mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94339622642 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81233467027 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525943396226 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5026108075 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8095238095 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1904761905 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246565454825 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794088116816 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878093793287 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147662976771 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795701017927 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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