Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor.
What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Poverty has been defined as a situation where a person could not earn basic necessities of life. Every nation experience some percentage of poor population and they all have different ways to deal with such population. In this essay , I will examine various factors for world poverty such as over population and increased rate of unemployment. Further I will suggest some ways by which we could help weaker section of the society.
The major reasons for the poverty around the world is overpopulation. Due to oversized population, resources are not distributed rationally and thus, a rich man is becoming richer and a poor is becoming poorer. The best way to solve this issue is to bring awareness among public to adapt contraceptive methods and discuss the benefits of small family.
Another significant reason that contributes to poverty around the world is unemployment. Linked with the above reason when major portion of country’s population is unemployed, it leads to poverty. A recent survey by ‘Rhode Island University’ discloses that 35 percent of total population is unemployed due to lack of job opportunities, thus they are part of underprivileged section. The better way to deal with this is to generate job opportunities for jobless people based on their skills. For example A person with no job does not have income thus would be considered as a poor.
Lets discuss, how poor people could be helped. The government authorities could help poor by opening shelter homes that offer three times meal to them. Additionally, government could offer jobs to poor people based on their skills, so that they could feed themselves and their family thus, do not add to the count of poverty percentage.
In conclusion, every nation around the world is dealing with the critical issue of poverty. The two main factors responsible for the poverty is over population and unemployment. However, taking significant measures such as better job opportunities and shelter homes for poor could help poor to a great extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: necessities
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Suggestion: experiences
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19696969697 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01314650364 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3046097811 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2777777778 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33076653769 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106716799363 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633155156961 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183033215126 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391392476108 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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