Some people believe that visitors to other countries follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Tourism has always been regarded as an industry that increases the national income. Many ideas have been discussed for the sustainability of this increase. While some people argue that the host country should welcome cultural differences for being attractive country to visit. Some others state that the maintenance of the society rules is more important than increasing income so visitors to other countries follow local customers, behavior and rules. This essay will both views, then I will give my perspective on this matter.
The first idea is that the more you are aware of diversity and respect new cultures, the more tourists you attract and the more you gain from tourism. If the host country develop its tourism sector as they will respond to different cultures and greets a tourist with respect and kindness, these tourist will feel like at their home, and they will want to experience more freely. One clear example is that if you are aware of the request of Chinese visitors which are unwilling to change the habit of eating during their holiday, you can make these visitors like at home to build a Chinese Street on which there are many Chinese restaurant. In this way, you can answer their needs and still increase your income.
Secondly, some of them express that community rules considered the significant matter for the maintenance of order should also be applied to tourists to not break these rules so visitors should follow the customs and behavior. Although strict community rules are not applied in most countries, if you want to see Persepolis, one of UNESCO Heritage Sites, you have to go to Iran where is governed by Islāmic rules. According to rules, women must have to cover their head and men must avoid an American shave.
In my opinion, although codes and customs are recognized the backbones of society, if the tourist does not obey these rules for a maximum 10 days, it does not deeply unsettle the society order however forcing the tourist to practice customs may make them avoiding to visit the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 629, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'restaurants'?
Suggestion: restaurants
... Street on which there are many Chinese restaurant. In this way, you can answer their need...
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Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mmunity rules considered the significant matter for the maintenance of order shou...
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Line 7, column 256, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoiding visiting'.
Suggestion: avoiding visiting
...urist to practice customs may make them avoiding to visit the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92753623188 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42131194248 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.6419452125 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.769230769 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5384615385 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226310555375 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771403480774 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951884034782 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131451022091 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103224820114 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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