Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Many argue that tourists have to obey the traditions of the visited country, whilst others are of opine that the locals should accept the foreign customs. This essay will discuss the both of views, and the opinion of the author will be given.
First and foremost, the number of countries is more than the number of population in comparison, therefore, it is logical for people adhering to the customs of other countries. For instance, a foreign language will definitely assist while visiting other country. Besides of this, before departure it is highly recommended to acquire information and knowledge on the tradition and culture of the visited place which afterwards can make a tourist’s life easier not only in communication with locals, but also swift integration to their culture. The utter importance of the valuable knowledge about that folk is that, the culture shock will definitely be eliminated. The more you learn about your visited country, the higher will be a chance to be integrated to local atmosphere. For instance, taking into account having differences between countries in terms of some laws and regulations, particularly on the roads can bring about difficulties.
On the other hand, it seems infeasible for host countries to adjust to all customs and behavior of their visitors. Likewise embracing the new influence of the tourists will drive the locals to be developed gradually. Furthermore, the multicultural feature might play a significant role in thriving of various spheres of the country, particularly the driving force of the government, economy.
In conclusion, it is worthwhile to take considerations in both ways in order to stimulate the international travelling. Being open-minded, welcoming to new influences, overcoming the cultural differences will make content both sides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended acquiring'.
Suggestion: recommended acquiring
... of this, before departure it is highly recommended to acquire information and knowledge on the tradit...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...customs and behavior of their visitors. Likewise embracing the new influence of the tour...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41754385965 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07270271921 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582456140351 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4215666311 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203652527419 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685096232764 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561708933794 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118553890146 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277783592388 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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