Some people believe that Young people who commit serious crimes should
be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree?
it is common knowledge that the youth crimes are a part of the big city’s life. The question, however, arise what can be done to reduce the problem of committing crimes by the young people. This essay will discuss the cause and effects of that problem and will also attempt to provide some practical solutions.
first and foremost, it is often claimed that the problem of youth crimes will never be successfully solved. Nuclear families are the norm of the day. In the past there were joint families in which grandparents used to teach moral values to children. Nowadays, both parents are working, and children are left unattended at home. Tired parents do not even have time to talk with their kids about everyday life. moreover, children are not getting social and emotional knowledge at their schools.
Luckily, there are also some practical solutions that can be applied to reduce the problem of crimes committing by young people. For instance, parents should take care of their young people especially in the first 8 years of their life. During that time kids are like sponge and absorb everything. Good family atmosphere should be part of the children life. parents should learn to listen kids needs and talk with them like with adult person. moreover, school must provide social and emotional education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10447761194 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.80019020405 2.80592935109 314% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548507462687 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 118.834295739 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 102.25 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0803777959106 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302195265229 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423210218556 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588985392143 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385618112184 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.8 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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