Some people believe zoos, where wild animals are kept in a man-made environment, should no longer exist in the twenty century.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Zoos have been an issue of debate for a long time. Some people oppose the idea of depriving wild animals of their rights to live freely in the wild. This essay will discuss the reasons why zoos are of great importance for keeping wild animals safe and secured.
First and foremost, zoos are considered to be perfect habitats conserve endangered animals species. For example, Panda and Gorilla are more likely to be on top of the list of extinct animals by the year 2030, and they might share the same sad destiny as the last male Rhinoceros which officially became extinct in Kenya a year ago. In zoos, not only are these species being offered an appropriate environment to live and grow, but they also are have a possible chance to survive by allowing experts to do researches on them in order to explore the hidden factors behind this odd extinct behaviour. In fact, for many people who pay attention to these vulnerable animals, this could be a potential reason to keep building much more zoos.
In addition, zoos represent an exceptional field of education for young people as they exhibit vast varieties of animals with many facts about each species. Moreover, no one can ignore the potential role being played by such facilities in offering both job opportunities for people and in offering source of income for countries. Overall, the idea that zoo facilities are unnecessary and useless is dangerous in itself for animals.
This essay argued that people who are against zoos have utterly preposterous understanding. In my opinion, zoos have far more benefits for animals and society as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...be perfect habitats conserve endangered animals species. For example, Panda and Gorilla...
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Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ent to live and grow, but they also are have a possible chance to survive by allowin...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eason to keep building much more zoos. In addition, zoos represent an exceptional...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, well, for example, in addition, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90073529412 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55562839309 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2786780935 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101401999923 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428128569813 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408825518225 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676933625314 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029941681718 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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