Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Others, however, refute this. Discuss both sides.
Nowadays, the number of vegetarians who refuse eating meat or fish is on the increase all over the world and there are some organizations that support this idea. Vegetarians believe that eating vegetables is based on a healthier diet and it is better for the environment as well. Others, however, refute this. Both points of view will be discussed.
There are some persuasive arguments in favor of eating no meat or fish. Firstly, It is believed that this is kinder to the animals since they are alive creatures and they have the right to live as well as humans. In addition, it is cruel to raise animals in factory farm conditions. Moreover, following a vegetarian diet is much healthier and cheaper. As an example, eating a burger a day will increase the risk of stroke or heart attack by changing the cholesterol level in the body and the results of these diseases would be debilitating for everyone.
On the other hand, there are some strong arguments against the idea of omitting meat from the daily diet. It is believed that all groups of foods such as nuts, grains, vegetables and meats are beneficial for the body and by eliminating each group we will cause some difficulties in absorbing nutrients through the body. Besides, If animals are not slaughtered for eating purposes by human, there would be no warranty that they will be safe in the nature since they will be hunted by other animals or die because of some diseases.
In conclusion, although vegetables are healthy and beneficial for the body, eating meat and poultry as part of the daily diet is beneficial as well. There should be a balance in each person's eating habits which makes it a nutrition diet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79037800687 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62139630108 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7179168411 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266223083869 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102462557599 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927483280476 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172177240115 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090895944737 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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