Nowadays many people believe the family members are more important in their life than their friends. In my opinion this claim cannot be true in an absolute way as each of these groups of people play different roles in our life. Therefore, in this essay we will try to consider this thoughtfulness and speak in more details about the impacts that our relatives and family can have in our life in comparison to our friends.
Our immediate family are the first group of people who we face in our life and get the most and early impacts in our breeding. In the second place maybe it is our extended family that our temperament gets effects from them. A good relationship between siblings in a family can build up a strong correlation among them when they get older. Although, the relationships inside the families are closer in eastern countries, we must not forget that families still play the most important roles in forming our personality throughout the world.
However, in the past the first people who children started to communicate with were their siblings and parents, in the today world, by shrinking the number of family members, and by going to kindergarten in very early ages, the effects that we get from the people outside of our family circle are getting more and more permanent. This means, it may happen in one's life, that a closer relationship formed between us and our friends in comparison to our relatives. On the other word, the number of brothers and sisters that we have, the community and culture that we live in and many other parameters might increase or decrease the importance of friends or family members for someone.
In conclusion, we cannot make it as a rule of thumb, that family members or friends are always more important in one's life. This could be different from a person to another person based on variant parameters that we grew up under it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75914634146 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55175277445 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496951219512 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3203112022 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.083333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215868736689 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967408715466 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800535290446 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149275314964 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348506619471 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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