There is no denying the fact that cars have impacted our lives to a great extent. Some people argue that cars have more demerits as compared to its merits. This essay will discuss my agreement to this fact and examine both the advantages and disadvantages of owning a car.
To commence with the favour of notion there are abundant factors behind the standpoints of the car. First and foremost, the car it's more disadvantages than it is created of enormous pollution and disease, instead of bad impact on the environment. Owing to this face of difficulties by a human. Nowadays, majority of the masses purchase of own vehicle, due to increase rate of petroleum and diesel. In addition, it creates a hazardously horrible situation for the economy. This, individual should be in control of the user traffic bicycle.
Moving further, few reasons can be accounted for considered this positive development. These days, they dramatically gain more population in the scenario. So the majority of people have car benefit that when they visit outside at time they easily usage of it every time and on any place. Due to this, they are not waiting to provide a vehicle by authorities. For instance, sometimes they are need of own car in an emergency case. And they not with of the other vehicle. Resultingly, if people should buy to own car and it more advantage.
To sum up, it clear that the car it's more advantage. But we can not neglect that the behind of face difficulties in the environment. People should that use of car is necessary time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80149812734 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80260448021 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543071161049 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1932654201 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.4736842105 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0526315789 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94736842105 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212011643134 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610249101487 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738828932184 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130043660598 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367214681782 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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