Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
There are few individuals who consider price as most vital criteria while buying any product or service. Although I agree that people need to be sure enough before making a large purchase but necessity is the most important criteria to be considered while buying anything.
On one hand, there are many individuals who consider buying latest products as status symbols and this is the main reason of increasing debt. Flashy sales, appealing advertisements and tempting offers attracts people to buy the products which they do not even need or there may be cases that they already have similar products at home. According to survey held by National Library, 8 out of 10 individuals are in debt and the major reason is over expenditure. People should analyze the requirement of the product and then decide if it is necessary or not.
On the other hand, sometimes necessity can over shadow the price of the product or service. For instance, if anyone is sick and is admitted to hospital then getting better is the basic necessity. At this point, person’s budget becomes flexible and the only motive is to get healthy as soon as possible. However, these situations are rare and most of the time price need to be considered as important factor while buying goods or services.
In conclusion, people should think twice before spending large amount of money on undesirable products or services, except in case of necessity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buying the latest'.
Suggestion: buying the latest
...there are many individuals who consider buying latest products as status symbols and this is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99159663866 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68013218658 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4405666697 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232809535627 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846595244732 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614396000925 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137968319847 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048153453306 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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