These days it is has become increasingly common for children to move away from home to pursue higher education or in search of better job prospects. While some people encourage their children to leave their house on becoming adults, so that they can be independent and responsible, others believe they should stay longer as having a security of a home, they can save extra money. In this essay we shall discuss both perspectives and argue that, children should leave their parents house as soon as possible.
To begin with, staying away from home makes a person less dependent on their parents and forces them to take control and charge of their actions. Moreover, it also gives them the freedom to focus on one's dream and ambition without causing any trouble to the parents. For instance, many students go abroad for higher studies and take up part-time jobs to sustain themselves, thus developing a habit of self reliance and work life balance from an early age. Consequently, making them better equipped to face the world and take on any challenges.
On the contrary, children who stay with their parents don't have to go through the hassle of searching and settling in a new home. Most of their earnings can be put in savings, thus financially securing their future. In addition, students can take up online courses which offer the benefit of studying from home therefore, saving time and money. Although staying at your parents home for too long makes you too attached and some find it extremely difficult to leave even if there's a better opportunity elsewhere.
To sum it up, is it advisable for children to leave the nest once they turn into adult? Absolutely! Although it may seem difficult at first and there are chances of feeling home sick, but you also get a sense of achievement. Furthermore, you are no longer a child and staying away puts the onus of your life on yourself. Therefore in my opinion, children should move from home, thus giving them an opportunity to sore high and fend for themselves
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82997118156 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54100244717 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579250720461 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4629114285 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.733333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9333333333 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363485792842 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112326978601 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115246423548 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220077147192 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144260417033 0.056905535591 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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