Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe your circumstances
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to your advertisement about offering a computer course, in today's newspaper. Although, I do not have a formal education in computers, I am really keen to pursue it. In addition, I will be joining a new job next month and a lot of my work is computer based, hence I will need to develop my computer skills.
Let me explain in detail. Firstly, according to your article the course is available only to those who have completed their elementary course. However, I do not posses the same. As I started working from a young age in my father's shop, I never had the need to do so. Secondly, I recently discovered my passion for Digital Animation and so I left my family business to follow my dreams.
In conclusion, I would like to request if you could please make an exception and allow me to enrol for the course. Let me add that I am a quick learner and always been interested in computers, hence it will not be a problem in keeping abreast with the other students.
I eagerly look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Mary Fernandes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59595959596 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69621296083 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5109225047 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.8333333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 4.34317383033 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226027859444 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638266512048 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767054632236 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103361482684 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620403272908 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.