In comparison to film stars and CEO's; nurses, doctors and teachers are paid less though their work hold more importance. I agree with the above statement. This essay will discuss firstly, that there should be equal distribution of resources and secondly, professionals should be paid according to worth of work done by them.
It is often seen that nurses, doctors and teachers, who are professionally trained, are paid less. This is usually because of unequal distribution of resources that some earn more than others. We admire film stars and love to watch their movies again and again. Sometimes the content of the movie is brilliant and other time we just watch it because of actors popularity. due to this they earn millions. But not every actor is successful. Similarly, doctors who has expertise in their field charges in millions so there isn't much difference. For example; super specialist hospitals doctor charges more than a clinic doctor.
It is aptly said that you get what you can give. It actually depends upon person to person how dedicated they are towards their work thus if they put hard-work in their desired field, they can definitely get success. In any profession, money is generated by the number of people his work gets appreciated by. If a doctor is professionally skilled, he will get more patients due to word of mouth. Similarly, if a actors movie gets good reviews more people will come to watch it, in-turn, both will earn handsome money. For Instance; according to a survey conducted by HT city dated Nov 2018, said that 73% of population watch Salman Khan Movie because his image in society is positive.
To conclude, there is certainly a difference in pay scale of professionals over film stars but everyone earns out of their skills.
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- Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of th 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96321070234 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66789865763 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0122362722 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4444444444 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185554508052 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561164224254 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495496562912 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115072182632 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480877960467 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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