Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that space programmes should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
Expenditure on developing technology on outer space exploration has been a subject of concern for many. A school of thought holds that spending money on researching outer space seems to be ludicrous. I partly agree with this thinking and the reasons will be further elaborated in this essay.
There are justifications for people to subscribe to the view that the investment in space exploitation seems to be far-fetched and there are more strategies to allocate this money. Firstly, the Earth is facing survival issues which are more urgent than space exploration. Climate change and global warming are a case in point which correlate with the existence of human beings. The authorities should prior to devote government budget to develop technology and improve environmental quality such as air and water contamination. This may entail maintaining the life-long of humans. Secondly, the massive fund can be diverted to develop vaccines and medicine which is a welcome trend in recent years. This can be attributed to reduce the far-reaching disease or pandemic and stabilize global finance. Corona Pandemic is a case in point. This epidemic disease claims millions of lives and wreck havoc on the global economy owing to the lack of vaccines in developing countries. Instead of alloting to space exploitation whose result is not guaranteed, people should allocate this money to have a deep research on the vaccine. It can bring about a number of immediate benefits.
On the other hand, I firmly hold the view that omitting the benefit which comes from outer space exploration is not wise. To begin with, the funds can open the door to discover a new planet when the Earth is inhabitable. This stems from our planet is overpopulated and deplete the natural resources, thus spending money on space exploration to find out other planets and replace the Earth is an essential investment. Additionally, satellites were original to serve the quest of space exploration. Nowadays, it facilitates the development of fields such as weather forecast, navigation and telecommunication. For instance, satellites assist people in the accurate forecast about the weather in order to minimize the damage not only on finance but also on the death toll.
In conclusion, though the investment on space exploitation seems to be ludicrous, I contend that it also contains a tangle of profit for people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'wreak havoc'?
Suggestion: wreak havoc
...ic disease claims millions of lives and wreck havoc on the global economy owing to the lack...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'deep research'.
Suggestion: deep research
...ople should allocate this money to have a deep research on the vaccine. It can bring about a nu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20519480519 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97954345562 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54025974026 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5550492311 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4285714286 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15223885882 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443489537409 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044431649569 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950417903223 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182281734328 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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