Some people feel that global warming should be dealt with by governments. Others feel that it is the responsibility of individuals in society to solve the problem. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Global warming is the mot topic of discussion in today's era.Over the past few years, there has been a gradual increase in the temperature of the earth’s surface. In order to combat the issue, some people believe that members of society should take some measures whereas, several others along with me feel that higher authorities are accountable to handling the situation.
On the one hand, proponents of the former view believe that the global warming is the impact of human behaviour, and, therefore, it is their own responsibility to take certain initiatives collectively to solve the issue by choosing to Place limits on the amount of carbon that polluters are allowed to emit. For instance, Increase vehicle fuel efficiency and support other solutions like electric cars and hybrid vehicles which cut down the carbon di oxide emissions to the level of zero percent. Of late such cars are becoming highly popular among environment friendly people across Japan and even Germany. Such practices have a prolonged positive effect upon the environment which implies that people should take the responsibility to handle the situation.
On the other hand, many others along with me certainly feel that the governments have the power to implement legislation that compels individuals and industries to act cautiously, and adhere to strict environmental protection standards. For instance, Norway just became the first country in the world to ban deforestation, a ground-breaking move that could have a major global impact. By committing to zero deforestation, this means Norwegian lawmakers will not award any government contracts to companies that take part in clear-cutting of trees. As deforestation leads to climate change due to the decreasing number of trees available to capture increasing carbon dioxide levels in the atmosphere. Furthermore, as the leaders of their countries, it is the government’s responsibility to stand up to face the battles their people are fighting and by taking necessary actions, governments can make a radical difference to lead a fight against the global warming.
To conclude, although individuals’ little efforts to deal with the climate change can have a long term effect, governments, being leaders, have a major responsibility to take the situation under control by enforcing laws on the people to live a sustained life. I, therefore, strongly believe that higher authorities should take necessary actions to solve the issue of global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42820512821 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11447280104 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571794871795 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.9051991356 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.846153846 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236806301152 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721549465254 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591775770615 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145605455721 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487992130873 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.