A school of thought thinks that it is the responsibility of producers to reduce overpackage of products whereas others believe that consumers should desist themselves from buying excess packaged goods . In this essay , I will discuss how both producer and consumer are responsible for limiting the amount of packaging of goods .
Firstly , an initiative has been taken recently that customers would be charged extra for purchasing carry bags along with their bought items . As a consequence the unnecessary purchasing of carry bags has reduced in supermarkets . For example , Supermarkets in India charge extra Rs 5 for each carry bags .
Secondly , manufacturers should ensure that their products are simply packaged . Instead of wrapping a product several times , it should be wrapped in single packet which is very cost effective . Excessive packaging has adverse effects on environment . The plastic wastes are thrown in the garbage which in turn are thrown into river or sea . Thus causing pollution For instance , the cost of product increases with the price of packaging , so this can be reduced with easy and simple packing
On the other hand ,consumers also have the responsibility in reducing packaging to contribute to better environment. Customers should abstain themselves from using over packed goods . They should create public awareness by social media platform or other advertisements to reduce excessive packed goods . This in turn is beneficial to customers as it is a cost effective step . Customers need not have to pay extra amount for packaging . Secondly , consumers should be encouraged to buy products in a bulk so that products can be packed in a single packet .
To sum up , the amount of packaging of goods causes harms to environment and it is also wasting of resources. So, we ought to reduce the amount of packaging of products as possible as we could. Both the consumers and the providers have to take part in reducing the amount of packaging.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2523659306 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9214204134 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514195583596 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.5041150651 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308120694337 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101199017456 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600507939993 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175938865188 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699414106297 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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