A recent survey has stated that some section of people opine that the advent of technology is contributing in more socialisation where as others contradict it . In this essay , i will discuss both the views how modern technology has given rise to spirit of fraternity and will also give my opinion at the end.
Firstly, the advancement of technology has imparted a stronger virtual connection among people . Nowadays , it has become easier to contact with one another without physical presence . The burgeoning of Internet services has made our life easier . For example , nowadays people can easily connect with the help of different software apps like facebook and whatsapp which facilitate its users for calls and messages.
Secondly , general awareness among people has increased due to social media sites .The promotion of status updates and different posts in social media websites has helped in advertising or raising public awareness among its users .For instance, events are created or public awareness like "Save trees -Go green " are being posted on social networking sites .
On the contrary there are some instances where technology is depriving from socialization . In this modern era, individuals prefer social media platform to communicate rather than face-to-face communication . Mostly conversations are carried out through apps .As a result , people become less acquainted with their family and friends . To illustrate , Whatsapp communication are more popular nowadays in terms of messaging and calling which is mostly used to convey messages instantly.
Secondly, technologies have also adverse effects on individuals . People have become so much addicted to electronic gadgets that they are found to be constantly scrolling their phones without caring about their surroundings or society such as it has been seen that people are botherless for the incidents occurring next to them .
Thus , technology is a boon as well as disadvantageous to society. It has positive impacts like setting up virtual connections and raising public awareness whereas negative impacts like it reduces face to face communication and carelessness for surrounding vicinity . I believe that advantages of technologies on society outweigh its disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6081871345 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03141982788 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602339181287 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9276772698 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172080320819 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550579692385 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505365111677 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893984915111 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072946408192 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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