It is a common belief of a section of society that old music is more amusing than the new ones which has mix of International music like jazz, hip hop, remix etc .In this essay i will discuss the reasons behind necessity of music in one's life and will also mention how both types of music are important
Music plays a pivotal role in our life . People pursue music as a career or a hobby with great interest . A recent survey has revealed that music energises and soothes one's mind . Commuters are seen to be listening music while travelling to kill the boredom of long journeys. Also it has been seen that people listen songs during workouts. Along with it, music is heard while doing household works . This is the reason why Radio channels are introduced . It creates public awareness and also plays songs of different eras to amuse its listeners
Both types of music are important in their own ways . Golden era old songs were slow music with less bass beats and meaningful lyrics which soothes human mind . For example , the old songs of Kishore Kumar and Mohd. Rafi are still enjoyed by every generations . Furthermore traditional music like Classical music is very popular.University music degrees are offered on the basis of classical songs . NRI students pursue degrees in Classical singing . It enriches the cultural heritage and identity at the global level. For Example , the famous Vishwa Bharati University offers carnatic and classical music degree courses . Students at a global level take admission to this university .
New songs are equally enjoyed by new generation . These contain high bass beats and remixes which make public dance to their feet. Under the influence of International music, many different kinds of songs have been introduced like Rap song , remix version , peppe numbers , hip hop etc .Many music streams have been channelised with the help of International music. It has contributed a good source of income . For example , the rising stars like Honey Singh and Badshah the rappers have become popular among youngsters .
Thus , i believe that both types of music are important in their own ways . People are free to listen any type of music they want . Music has no boundary and no barriers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96505376344 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54898319433 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55376344086 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.2781153933 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9583333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 5.01903807615 917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378733159907 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972562172291 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934045312092 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235349994315 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457833025117 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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