Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is commonly believed that being famous means celebrities’ lives can be captured anytime by photographers as publicity. However, I believe that their privacy should be respected and hidden cameras must be restricted appropriately because the unwanted photos or videos can have detrimental effects on their lives.
On the one hand, it is widely argued by many that paparazzi can catch celebrities’ moments at anytime to produce better society’s understanding towards their personalities. Because being renowned makes stars sparkling in front of fans and social media followers, pictures or video clips that capture their daily basis may produce clearer views about their characteristics. Hence, the curiosity of followers encourages hidden photographers to taking shots of sensitive moments that usually end up published on newspapers. For example, a photo of David Beckham, a soccer star, looking after his children at a restaurant can impress readers, in turn numerous fans may strive to become a good dad likes him.
On the other hand, I agree that celebrities have a right to keep their personal life privately because the potential of depression is obvious if unwanted photos are published. Firstly, there is a plenty of scandals have been made due to disrespectful implementation of irresponsible photo makers. For instance, when My Tam, an exceptional singer in Vietnam, was found hanging out with a CEO of a vast corporation, number of her fans started posting aggressive comments on her Instagram page. As a result, she has suffered a serious depression for 2 years. This phenomenon shows that the publicity does not mean a person life can be easily destroyed by someone who just want to earn money from inappropriate pictures.
In conclusion, it is sometimes agreed by some that famous people should be photographed anywhere since it is a part of publicity. Nevertheless, I strongly disagree with this because mental issues happening to stars generated by undesired photos are really serious and their privacy right must be acknowledged.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'star'.
Suggestion: star
...this because mental issues happening to stars generated by undesired photos are reall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, really, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40432098765 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20336917543 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645061728395 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6943484534 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.692307692 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130580507453 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453398834113 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239912558348 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803758209438 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107929778968 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.