The graph shows the information about international conferences in three capital cities in 1980-2010.
The bar chart illustrates the number of international meetings conducted in the 3 different major cities between 1980 and 2010.
Overall, there was a significant growth in the number of conferences held in the city C over the given period, while the figures for the city A and B slightly decreased. Besides, the lowest figure for conferences organised in 1980 belongs to the city C, but surprisingly it became the highest in the end of the surveyed period.
In 1980, 35 is the number of conferences implemented in the city A which accounted for the highest followed by 30 in the city B. By contrast, there is no conferences held in the city C in the year. Then the year 2000 shows a dramatic increase in the number of international conferences in the city C to 35, which is higher than those in city A and B with about 27 and 23 respectively.
By 2010, city C saw a slight decline in the conferences’ number to around 31. Likewise, the figure for the city A and B kept felt down to 23 and 27 accordingly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no conferences'?
Suggestion: there are no conferences
...lowed by 30 in the city B. By contrast, there is no conferences held in the city C in the year. Then th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, if, likewise, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48648648649 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01854990607 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497297297297 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2929700433 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320125951748 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155575895474 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541227930203 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199804582013 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549416438999 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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