Some people focus on news in their own country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although many would argue that national news should be given more importance and need the attention of native public; however, I think that international news carries the same significance as the local ones. This essay will depict my thoughts on the above topic.
First and foremost, worldwide reports are very vital for any country’s development. The policies drafted by the parliaments of different nations can be read through their press releases. Not only these can affect a state economically but politically also. Because of this, many small nations derive their agendas regarding their nation progression and people’s well-fare. For instance, USA’s plans related to the crude oil prices has a major impact on most of the countries as they control largest share of export of the oil in the world. Moreover, the global news can put the light on over the good and bad things happening in a country. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
On the contrary, a country’s daily situations like disasters or crimes taking place can be known through the regional headlines. Owing to this, government can draft schemes to tackle with these particular situations. As a result, these measures can help the locals to cope with the mis happenings. For example, if there is a chance of flood in a certain area due to high pouring of rain in the hilly areas than the people can be alarmed by these news outlets. Hence, it is apparent why so many are in the favor of this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the importance of international news held great importance to smaller countries for their nation development. Nevertheless, the benefits of local news are too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ct a state economically but politically also. Because of this, many small nations de...
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Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'control the largest'.
Suggestion: control the largest
...impact on most of the countries as they control largest share of export of the oil in the world...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03378378378 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81998081888 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9535721946 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201275758558 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564782858244 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645895881823 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137912019155 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529432982879 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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