Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits to living in cities.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although many would argue that city life is beneficial for healthy lifestyle ; however, I think that rural life has more benefits than city as there is less pollution and crowd there. This essay will depict my thoughts on the above topic.
First and foremost, the countrysides are less populated. Owing to this, there is availability of lot of space for the construction of parks and sports grounds. As a result of this, the majority of populace will be indulged in more physical outdoor activities rather than remain in indoors. For example, in India , a research conducted by Sports authority of India shows that the physical wellness of people residing in villages is more than the population living in metropolitan. Moreover, pollution is low in these areas. Because of this, people can remain healthy for a long time.Needless to say, the benefits of way of life in rural areas stands in a good stead
On the contrary, there are some pitfalls that negate these merits of living in countryside and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that there are less health facilities including hospitals and medicines. Consequently, people have to visit the medical institutions situated in urban region not only for treatment but for diagnosis of disease also. Additionally, health awareness in public of rural is lower in comparison to town populace. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of living in countryside are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, i think, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19565217391 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96035953652 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.1073118166 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.307692308 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148757009221 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432651103306 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437415554629 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906561579835 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217519765528 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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