Some people have great ambitions in life, others don’t. Do you think ambition is important to succeed in life? Is it a positive or a negative quality to have?
Ambition is a key to achieve life goals but not necessarily everyone has an aim. Personally, I believe that it helps people to fulfill their dreams and to become successful and prosperous. It’s a fact that aiming in life is a positive quality to be determined but let’s discuss the flip side too.
To have an aspiration in life gives motivation to the people to achieve their targets. Firstly, it helps them to make plans, set their goals, work hard so that they can fulfill their dreams. In addition, an ambitious person gets rid of his bad habits and distractions in his life. What is more, a person’s desire always helps him to be self-disciplined and make himself to solve most of the problems with complete will power therefore he always remains focused towards his dreams. For instance, a person who is ambitious to become a doctor will always perform well with full of passion and hard work in his life.
On the other hand, unreasonable ambition in life of a person can lead to bad results. For example, if a person has big ambition but less talent who cannot achieve within his extent therefore he led astray. He will probably harm someone for his desired aim. Similarly, to become over ambitious is also a big concern where people with such condition when failed due to any reasons or circumstances so they start feeling humiliated which can coerce them to put their life on stake or take wrong decisions.
To recapitulate, become ambitious is not a piece of cake for everyone so it should be determined according to inner caliber, interest, commitments and circumstances to get the best out of it. So, I would say that It’s one’s responsibility to follow ethical ways to achieve their ambition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84175084175 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82891206725 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2843969389 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.714285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182951533414 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731415388714 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688457707583 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117003015139 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657338939215 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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